The Partner Comments

Glad the speaker (you?) walked away. I dig this strong indictment of those who’ll flagrantly and outrageously say anything to gain leverage on another soul. Your strong language was needed for this one, Neal. -Glen

The cadenced rhythm of your first stanza is quite intoxicating and shows great technical skill. I read it several times out loud. It is worth treasuring in a very fine poem. I think the line un-inked on the lease of the only life is a quite stunning line. I wish I'd written that!

Stupendous write. A unique and intelligent presentation of greediness, betrayal of trust and treachery. Very compelling with every line well executed and crafted.