Wednesday, March 5, 2014

The Parting Pain Comments

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The funeral is just over
All are back at home
The head count is less by one
My beloved isn’t seen any more.
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Amitava Sur
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Rubab Atwal 10 March 2014

a very touching poem....truly beautiful

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Patricia Grantham 09 March 2014

A tenderly written and touching write. You poured out your heart and soul in this poem. Todays pain and grief will be tomorrows healing. Earth has no sorrow that Heaven cannot heal. Heartfelt.

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Roseann Shawiak 09 March 2014

Amitava, my heart goes out to you. After losing a loved one, the sorrow leaves such a horrifying emptiness and silence, a hole in your heart that you can't fill. Know that sharing your grief through your poetry touches and helps others going through the same pain. One line that struck and resonated deeply within my mind was Feeling of loneliness is chewing the mind, it made me feel the pain you are feeling. Excellent expression and imagery of emotions you're going through, a heart-touching memory of your love. RoseAnn

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Valerie Dohren 06 March 2014

Know just how you feel Amitava, having just gone through it myself, and still suffering. It is one of the hardest things that life can throw at us, the price we pay for love it is said. You have expressed your feelings here, and you must continue to do so for as long as you feel you need to. My best wishes to you.

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Soulful Heart 05 March 2014

Ur grief has crossed over to the readers.... words that transcend pain to make it so universal n tangible..

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Amitava Sur

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