Monday, November 14, 2016

The Parting Kiss Of Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

A parting kiss bidding farewell and my eyes,
Asking the super moon to stay a little more,
An incomplete shower in a complete beauty,
Eyes need more kisses, and you more adore,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 November 2016

The parting kiss! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 24 November 2016

A poem full from feeling of peace in pain in every single word.....loved it... :)

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Bharati Nayak 15 November 2016

Pain and tenderness flow in beautiful lines.

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