The Parting Comments

There is genuine feeling here, simply expressed, the best way to communicate emotions. The repetition of 'I remember' is not overdone, and the ending, with 'I knew' and 'I know', makes the whole experience an optimistic one.

Very poignant, beautifully written, so very moving.....could picture and feel the scene.....10+

Paige, Excellent and poignant for one so young. I felt as the writer felt and almost did not want to read on for the pain, but I did read on, such a good poem.

For now I know he’s happier with the Lord; and one day, I’ll meet him there.... lot more happiness with Lord.. godd write and praise worthy......10 read mine rest in peace and butterflies around

A very sad parting, very well scripted...10+