Tuesday, February 24, 2009

The Parting Comments

Rating: 5.0

The bitter taste of your tongue rings sore in my ears
Your hand's hardness pushing on my bruised spirit
Your eyes pierce as silent witnesses to my hurt
The length of your legs an echo of the distance between us
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Chuck Petz 24 March 2009

Powerful work catalogueing utter devastation. I usually abhor the 'He's gone I'm Gonna Die' genre but this piece is unique.

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