Wednesday, December 7, 2005

The Parking Lot Comments

Rating: 5.0

Something about the way your hand moved against
the moonstone of my cheek, as we stood amidst a world
of curious eyes- people, who would have damned us
had they known I was your lover, not your wife.
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Amberlee Carter
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Lauren Michaels 06 September 2006

This is genuinely quite beautiful. The sentiment, the expression. I love it.

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G. Murdock 07 December 2005

Great lines '....streetlights acted like jealous gods'.....the stars began their waltz of insanity.... geez I wish I could feel and see things like this.

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Uriah Hamilton 07 December 2005

Truly poetic, sensual time traveling.

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Louise Mcvicar 07 December 2005

wow, that was awesome. Very well written. LMc

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