The Park Of Birkenhead Comments

I enjoyed this poem...well done! Ruthy

As Anthony said, big thumbs up...keep writing.. John

Yes we know the rest this is good poetry. Be where of changing stuff that you know is right, a lot of so called experts have no creative sight. Just trust your passion and the inspiration that it brings, and the natural rythem that make your poem sings. I was there walking withyou thats the important thing. Brilliant

interesting piece woven with fine rhymes and rhythm...stunning poem..10+++