Wednesday, May 2, 2012

The Park Comments

Rating: 4.8

They come from everywhere
For a stroll in the park
And even the joggers
To make their mark.
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Walterrean Salley
COMMENTS
Sally Plumb Plumb 27 June 2012

enjoyed the stroll.

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Simon Collins 25 June 2012

Great feeling here, just like a park, well written

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Ruth Walters 31 May 2012

Parks are so special, little oasis of pleasure away from the busy mainstream....they're where lovers swim... Ruth

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Marieta Maglas 28 May 2012

wonderful descriptive poem...keep writing, my friend

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Romeo Della Valle 24 May 2012

An amazing and well crafted write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Subodh Pandey 24 May 2012

a lovely and beautiful write

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Gajanan Mishra 23 May 2012

I love it. Congratulation my dear poet. I invite you to read my poems and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra

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Shahzia Batool 20 May 2012

offering a few moments of relief from the tensions of the world....

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Captain Cur 15 May 2012

That is an interesting thing about parks. Dogs are usually quiet, too busy sniffing and exploring, I guess. Great flow and rhythm to your poem.

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Hans Vr 12 May 2012

This is a beautiful and inspiring poem. Very well written with good rhyming and melodious verses The beauty of the park, so nice.

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Besa Dede 10 May 2012

Beautiful narration Salley, I really enjoyed reading this jovial poem. I quite like the delicate depiction that you give while describing the park. Regards, ~Besa

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Rekha Mandagere 08 May 2012

Man made nature is an everyday joy to all! ! ! Beautiful, I simply love the description of the park. You must visit 'Brindavan Garden' in Mysore, India.

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Danny Draper 06 May 2012

This a fine tribute to our parks and need for and use of them. They can be places of great tranquility and pleasure and recharge our energy and mix and observe so many happenings.

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Dave Walker 06 May 2012

A beautiful poem. My daughter loves going to the park, she's only three but once she's there we have a right job getting her out again. A great write.

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Spiritual Seeker 06 May 2012

Beautifully penned...relax and easy flow...making me wanting to walk in the park, instead of in the room now! I simply love nature....A 10.

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Wang Qian 04 May 2012

Purely beautiful poem~like wonderful and easy steps on the park road ^^

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Valerie Dohren 04 May 2012

Lovely poem, you make a walk in the park sound wonderful.

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ijlal Haider 04 May 2012

very nice... its beautifully simple...wow...

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Heather Wilson 02 May 2012

Beautiful poem, a lovely flow as it takes us around the park.

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Walterrean Salley

Walterrean Salley

Savannah, Ga
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