Sunday, October 28, 2018

The Paramour Moon And The Eunuch Nights Comments

Rating: 4.9

On the full moon night
The moon puts on the red dress
The eunuch nights lie still like a log
The moon embraces a heartful of unbearable sorrow
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Gayatri Phukan
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 December 2018

A thought provoking poem with superb imagery. Wonderfully written.

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Gayatri Phukan 12 December 2018

thank you.

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Bipin Churchung Rabha 27 November 2018

Beautiful.....! This is an imagery poem in which the moon feel sorrow for eunuch night.... Nicely written. Thank you, ma'am, for sharing!

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Gayatri Phukan 30 November 2018

thank you very much,

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Gayatri Phukan 30 November 2018

thank you for your valuable comment

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 November 2018

No one Just no one understandsl The pain of the heart of the moon The hunger of the heart of the moon... paramour moon and the pet birds turns wild. The game of make and break continues thus.. very nice poem and very originally constructed poem.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Gayatri Phukan 30 November 2018

Thank you very much Dr. Brahmin.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Gayatri. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Gayatri Phukan 30 November 2018

Thank you Mr. Kamalvi.

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Chinedu Dike 28 October 2018

Well thought-out and nicely brought forth with conviction. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Gayatri.

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Gayatri Phukan 30 November 2018

Thank you Mr. Dike.

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Dave Walker 28 October 2018

A great poem, and to be published in a magazine must be a great feeling.

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Gayatri Phukan 09 December 2018

thank you Mr.Dave Walker

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