The Paradox Comments
Somehow between the paradox of
heaven and hell is where my soul
was left with you
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Bonnie, A thought-provoking, well-descripted write... great poetry here! Robert
Yes, love can be like that - a paradox, but I guess the roller coaster you describe is more exciting than the merry go round of most relationships. You have expressed your angst with originality and skill in this bitter/sweet poem. Your last stanza sums it up very well and provides a satisfying cadence to the whole. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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7/27/2025 1:33:03 AM # 1.0.0
UMMM....For better or worse...? lol! Lots of verve, and poignance here, and delivered with smooth fluxion....Very nicely done, Bonnie! FjR