Saturday, March 26, 2011

The Paper Is Not Enough For Me. Comments

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I once perceived a girl striding a sidewalk
She was naive, but had a vigor in her walk
For she was in haste, just like running
I don't know how it happened, but she was cunning.
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Neela Nath Das 23 April 2012

The feeling for her is immeasurable, that's why it cant be expressed.Very nice.

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Neetha Sasidharan 17 March 2012

grt one....kp writting...grt rhymes.....gud comparison... kp finding rhymes....

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Vipins Puthooran 04 October 2011

I can guess that the stupendous beauty through your words, may be more elegant than 'Taj Mahal'and evoking the spark of love in your heart.. It's a beautiful poem...and I like this one..

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