Sunday, November 2, 2014

The Paper Girl Comments

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Her picture was in ‘The Courier',
A beauty with auburn hair,
I must admit I was taken in
As I sat alone, to stare.
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David Lewis Paget
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Roseann Shawiak 09 November 2014

Great poem, I enjoyed it! Your thoughts on fate becoming true just because you went looking for her, meeting at last. Wondering if you got together or is this imaginary? Either way, I loved this poem, great write. RoseAnn

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Shabeeh Haider 02 November 2014

A very well written poem. Your feedback on my poems will be appreciated

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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