Wednesday, July 26, 2017

The Pang In My Heart Comments

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All this happened between sunrise and sunset.
When I felt a pang in my heart.

They told me about your accident.
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Abderrahmane Dakir
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2018

Never expected it! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 27 July 2017

The disbelief we feel when we hear a loved one has died is so vividly portrayed here. The disbelief continues too for quite some time. It is hard to wake up to a new day and remember they are not there in that new day. Our loved one has joined the past. Well done, Mr. Dakir

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Thank you Susan so much for reading and writing this amazing review.

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