Friday, January 21, 2005

The Palm Of My Hand Comments

Rating: 4.4

The lines cross like motorways,
And the rain leaves splashes on the roads,
There are no cars,
Just the pen,
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Nick Hilton
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Lare Austin 21 January 2005

Hi Nick...very nice read. Yes...I have felt this also...very nice read. You have very neatly captured this in precise wording.... Lare Austin

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Herbert Nehrlich1 21 January 2005

I have had the experience of that, thinking almost the same, bullets and all. Good poem H

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