The Pale Green Light Comments
Still I feel the pale green light
Still I forget to smell you the lighty
Still you shine on my darkside
Light make me the luck, but still the wisdom
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The last stanza ends up as an earnest prayer! Good! Enjoyed reading! !
I was just reading about the concept the allegory cave of Plato. Now I really found some inspirational lines to link it with. Nice contrast between light and darkness as well as ignorance and wisdom. Nice theme.
More and more light. Light is to dispel darkness. Very nice thought and diction.
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8/2/2025 3:03:21 PM # 1.0.0
Very nice thought. Light really plays a vital role in our lives.