The Pair Of Deer Comments

so fantasy, wonderfully penned for the two beautiful deer, great done

Born as a deer but wish to compete with a lion.A nice metaphor.

A beautiful, restless, innocent pair Of little, harmless, heavenly deer quite fantastic expression of the pair of deer, some animals are really gentle and harmless, great poem

A beautiful, restless, innocent pair Of little, harmless, heavenly deer Standing in the wild meadow there Beside the clear, running, lovely river;