Thursday, July 25, 2013

The Painting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frozen in time, the tides, the ocean’s roar.
Yet, intent upon her work, she is painting
a scene from that day, framed by memory.
In it, she’s in shock, unable to help.
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Jackie Allen
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Yasmin Khan 03 August 2013

A pleasant surprise to find you on this site! I enjoy beautiful lines again. Some scenes of our life cry out to be painted again.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 July 2013

the kite’s multi-ribboned tail, it is waving Like an omen warning of things to come so beautifully portrayed, this image of a haunting grief! wonderful poem, Jackie.

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