Very good imagery and mellowed tone. But in the second half; the tempo dulled a bit and the ending should have been made even more effective; having started so wonderfully well. However I liked it for its sheer beauty and give u 10
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Very good imagery and mellowed tone. But in the second half; the tempo dulled a bit and the ending should have been made even more effective; having started so wonderfully well. However I liked it for its sheer beauty and give u 10