Tuesday, October 31, 2017

The Painter Comments

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As he draws me

In this empty room
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Rebecca Succes
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Douglas Scotney 31 October 2017

Quite spacious Rebecca; but please fix to 'His imagination is...', 'Every color', 'Come through' and ' My confidence'. 'Naked with no clothes on' is a tautology.

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