Thursday, November 5, 2020

The Pains I Bore Comments

Rating: 4.5

The pains were too great to bare
Yet I bore every bit of it
My delicate heart I watched you tear
With your ugly shinning teeth
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Khairul Ahsan 05 November 2020

This is a poem from a woman's point of view, written by a male poet. The poem is good, but a bit too long and repetitive. 'Submissive I was with great compliance And grew them daily afresh' - To me, these were the best two lines of your poem.

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