Saturday, August 1, 2020

The Pain Will Leave Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pain will leave
Just as the soul leaves the body
The scars will erase
Just as the dawn breaks out
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Aarzoo Mehek
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 July 2021

sometimes, the pain will continue inside Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2021

People come and go...so true! A wonderful poem! !

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 August 2020

Nothing is steady and eternal Things will change.....yes it's true but sometimes I am confused about the truth that - " Truth is not true eternally! ! ! "

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2020

Scars of love and life! ! ! ! Muse of mankind on earth; Chains and pains! Overcoming the odds along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 03 August 2020

Nothing is steady and eternal.......significant........thank u......anjandev roy.

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Rajnish Manga 02 August 2020

The poem has triggered a churning in my mind since there is some substance that keeps that churning on. Thanks. The poem goes into MyPoemList.

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Rajnish Manga 02 August 2020

'Nothing is steady.... Life keeps evolving'.... That's the truth of life just as the pain will leave us- sooner or later. But to stretch it to the extreme end where soul leaves the body is a bit too hard. As we all see the life of a man is like a collage of different shades and hues, pains and pleasures. All in all, It's truly a thought provoking poem. Thanks, Aarzoo ji.

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M Asim Nehal 01 August 2020

Yeah nothing is permanent in nature, it keeps evolving. Phool khilte hain aur bikhar jate hain ye silsila yun hi chalta rehega.....

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