Wednesday, May 21, 2014

The Pain That Still Lingers Comments

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To shed that skin of old and walk towards a new dawn, has proven most difficult.

To claw myself back from where my mistakes have left me, has put me in a state of terror.
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Govind S Harigovindam
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Geetha Jayakumar 09 August 2014

Beautiful write Govind. Very true said in each lines, it's the guilt which one feel make them think so. It comes as pain.. Very true said, one find it difficult to move a head as we cannot forget the past...But by always keeping engaged in some other work can help one.. Even writing down the feelings or poems can really help out to release the pain. A very poignant write. I could feel the pain in this poem! ! Keep writing. I liked the way you presented it.

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Valsa George 25 July 2014

An wound may leave a scar, but each time you agitate a wound it will not heal, but only cause to bleed.... Losing oneself in past follies is no way of getting redeemed! Live in the present and pledge not to repeat your past mistakes! A very poignant write!

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Salini Nair 23 May 2014

nice write Govind....LIKE IT

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Gajanan Mishra 22 May 2014

very fine, ocean of self-agony, thanks, I am grateful.

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