Friday, February 11, 2011

The Pain Of Patience Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loving you
Through copper wires
Has taught me
The pain of patience
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Annabel Cruz
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Karen Touzalin 06 July 2017

Wow, the images of longing and need is so strong, great work again!

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2016

I ration the pleasure A miser…savoring and conserving For the famine That lies after the tone

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Esteban Arellano 13 February 2011

Thank you Anna. The last stanza brings the poem together nicely. Excellent.

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Karen Touzalin 12 February 2011

Loved this poem, again your poetry strikes a personal note, you articulate my experience, thank you

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Annabel Cruz

Annabel Cruz

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