The Pain Of Love Comments

Well articuated and nicely expressed with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions....

You've very well expressed.Meaningful poem.Keep it up.

true life has its up and down like a tune. good write pamela.

It's amazing how that knife is stored in the cupboard of our heart. I take it out every now and then to clean the stains..

Lovely. I personally would have put the 'you' in the second last line as the first word in the last line, to give it better flow. try reading it with the word moved in your head, and see if it sounds better or looks better. I may be wrong but definitely try it. You get ten! Yeah! !

Time is the best healer. dawn and dusk circling. thus have been going on. your composition fine! .....10+