Wednesday, January 9, 2008

The Pain Of Being Me. Comments

Rating: 3.4

I sit here with great mental anguish,

Acidic thoughts in my mind languish
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Cody Moore
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Katharine O'Neal 14 January 2008

wow, another great poem for it's strikingly dark theme and bleek ending. it is a truly gorgeous idea that one is completely free in death, but also rather sad that one would invite it. again, great great imagery with the demonic play ground and the claws, it really gives the 'mental anguish' life. thanks for posting, Kath

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Soul Writer 10 January 2008

Another great write cody, with your great vocabulary i think you could even expand on this one.... have a look at my poem 'The Beast Within' 1st poem i ever wrote. Think you might find some similarity's Peace

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Barbara Bizarro 09 January 2008

Wow, this is really good, Cody...

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