I sit here with great mental anguish,
Acidic thoughts in my mind languish
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Another great write cody, with your great vocabulary i think you could even expand on this one.... have a look at my poem 'The Beast Within' 1st poem i ever wrote. Think you might find some similarity's Peace
wow, another great poem for it's strikingly dark theme and bleek ending. it is a truly gorgeous idea that one is completely free in death, but also rather sad that one would invite it. again, great great imagery with the demonic play ground and the claws, it really gives the 'mental anguish' life. thanks for posting, Kath