The Pain Never Ends Comments

This was good. I don't think takeing this persons life is the choce but I don't think runing is good eother. Is there anyother way to help her? Maybe telling someone that can do something legaly. How old is she? I don't know how things are for her but they sound hared but, she is not going throw this all alone she has you. A great poem -Good job!

I like it although for me it was hard to read