The Pain In My Joys Comments

An exquisite conception structures this poem, paying tribute to different phases of beauty and always coming back to the image of a rose. It is like an aesthetic pilgrimage. I especially like these lines: /opening the window of colours / to paint their childhood bright...! / Beauty comes at the price of enlarged, tender sympathies, and there will always be pain in that. I give this a 10!

A very nice perception.The last verse beautiful to close it.

Pain and joy stay side by side! It is an irrefutable fact of life. Like the rose, if we too can take them with equanimity and balance, life becomes a saga of success. This great message is beautifully illustrated through the metaphor of a rose! Enjoyed the poem Jaishree! A 10

Very nicely conceived and written, Jaishree

Every one have a past consists of flowers and thorns......Beautiful.....liked it.....thank you for sharing :)