Tuesday, March 4, 2008

The Pain In Her Eyes Comments

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Look at the way she looks at you. Can’t you see the pain in her eyes?
Can’t you see the tears on her cheeks?
Now you ignore her, talk about her to her friends.
You’ve turned them away from her. Are you happy now?
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Maura Hunt
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Dee Daffodil 04 March 2008

I see that this is your first posted poem...so welcome to P.H! Great poem to start with...lots of feeling and empathy there! Hugs, Dee

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 04 March 2008

beauty works...... really.

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