Sunday, September 10, 2006

The Pain I Hide Comments

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I press my fingers against
The rain-stained glass.
My breath leaves
A wet white fog.
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Olin Yeats
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Sophia White 11 September 2006

This is a vividly sad and beautiful poem, Mr. Yeats. You express an emotion/feeling/mood that strikes us all every now and then. Lovely.

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William Jackson 10 September 2006

Your poem gives emotional pain a human face. It struck a nerve. It is a sad yet poignant poem.

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