Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, April 9, 2014

The Pain Disappears Comments

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The pain disappears
When you refuse to wear out
Stand alone like rock
And take it as joke
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Amitava Sur 10 April 2014

Human life itself is structured with pain, to continue life you have to agree with.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

i like it Anthony Elion Jr.9 minutes ago This is deep keep it up! This is vivid too Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

it''s okay steven king6 minutes ago I am really not comfortable doing this, it's been over 10 years since I was last here and this was never imposed upon an author back then. Who am I to critique someone else work. I simply want to reclaim several poems that have bee archived. It would be easier to just delete them from the database.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

The pain disappears When you refuse to wear out

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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