The Pain Comments

How can i tell you about my pain When all i do is walking through the rain So no one knows I’m crying And yet I’m still trying These lines are so beautifully written. You have another great poem here. I just love how you are able to express your thoughts.

liked these lines: To reach your dreams not mine And walk across the line The one that separates me from the rest The one that made you think I might be the best walking in the rain and crying.......... reaching the dreams. all fine expressionsl thank u for sharing. would like to get ur comments on my poems too.

i feel like i 'm back to childhood! Pain...Sad..everyone has this experience...because this is normal thing that was happend and will happen but dont weak if u stabbed by pain... pain is hurtful but it always make us stronger and evolve to better person! the end of the lines, i feel very good to read it...it is a reality that u whisper...and it is pure!

W0ww! ! This poem was awesome! ! I loved it! Keep on writting!

hey....dat was a gud one....really striked me......Really, smtimes v r not able 2 xpress our pain, even if v r dying to do so...

This one is awesome too =)