Its dark I cant breath someone help me,
it hurts so much and I just cant make it stop,
it fells like I'm floating,
wait what’s that voice I here form somewhere in the darkness,
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great poem, very touching, bad things happen to everyone we just have to keep going, great write
That was really good. Very descriptive you almost feel like your there. Great write.
Oh, very nice senes and have deep heart.good and salute u much....