Monday, January 5, 2009

The Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its dark I cant breath someone help me,
it hurts so much and I just cant make it stop,
it fells like I'm floating,
wait what’s that voice I here form somewhere in the darkness,
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Terry jones
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Said El Banna 26 January 2009

Oh, very nice senes and have deep heart.good and salute u much....

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Brianna Trombley 17 January 2009

great poem, very touching, bad things happen to everyone we just have to keep going, great write

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Kallie Madison 15 January 2009

yo yo! ! what a great poem friend! !

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Chocolate Bunny 05 January 2009

That was really good. Very descriptive you almost feel like your there. Great write.

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