the pain that you feel,
but cant touch.
a pain you know of,
but cant explain
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i can relate to your poem very well. i hate to admit it, but i'm going through those exact feelings. it's so hard to describe, but u did so well explaining it. you are talented
this poem is discriptive yet it cannot fully describe pain of the emotions.the pain only God can free us of. but who can? As far as I can tell you did a fantastic job.
Amazing... you took the words right out of my heart... so much pain: (
I like the way u wrote this poem, its put together very well.
i know the way that you are feeling because thats the way that i feel most of the time.
sadly...i know this pain...it stratches at the soul intill nothing is left...
pain and its negative factors is a subject of poem and I liked the poem.