I am a pagan,
Worshiper of the false,
Believer in illusions,
Keeper of myths.
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Obviously you are NOT a pagan otherwise you would know that 'sacrifice' does not exist in the pagan or wiccan cultures. Sacrifice does not even exist in the satanic culture(yes I am a satanist) unless you consider it a sacrifice for lesser people not to like you. Learn something about the culture before you try to write about it please.
Wow- you even brought the Satanists out from beneath the rocks with this. Always interesting to see who people's the poemhunter court. (smile) and I AM jealous! I love how resourceful minds keep seeking to order the world under their feet- hopeless task though it be! Your writing is rooted in bedrock. Keep it up! !