Wednesday, April 1, 2015

The Package Comments

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A surprise! A surprise! What will it be?
Bringing it closer, 'cause I wanna see.
Is it a prize? or maybe a gift?
Oh, does it matter? My spirits have lift!
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Arlene Dery
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Roseann Shawiak 08 April 2015

Great poem, full of excitement, anticipation, surprise! Mysterious and spell-binding! Keeping us wondering what it was you were given. Loved this poem, thank you for sharing it! RoseAnn

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Arlene Dery 08 April 2015

Glad you enjoyed it! A fun one to write.

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Clarence Prince 04 April 2015

It sounds like a package to remember! Thanks for sharing, Arlene!

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Arlene Dery 05 April 2015

Thank you! How fun!

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Arlene Dery

Arlene Dery

Salem, OR
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