The Pace Of Life Comments

Ernestine>>>Was reading through some of your older work & stopped on a dime when i came upon this piece, as it is the epidome of how we should treat, look at & live life...You have such an absolute mantra about your poems on lifestyle & nature & this particular pice is (in my view) the mainframe to so many of the mastered works you have written since....Solid craftwork...Structural melliflousity to astute locution... fjr

I'm glad that I took the time to slow down for this one.Lovely write and so well written.Love Duncan

Ernestine, I like this poem very much and the message is sound, sent so much better too I think in rhyme. Thanks Egal Bohen..

Great advice, Ernestine, and I hope I can follow it. It's nice to see another poet who practices in rhyme here at the home of elitist post-moderners. My only suggestion would be a closer adherence to meter. Thanks for the poem.

I'm not for sure that my body and brain have ever been that steady and sure, but thanks for the poem, I am for slowing down.