Saturday, October 31, 2009

The Owner Of My Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

My stars
Where are you my stars
My stars
Not only bright… white
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Tristan Maverick
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Audrey Monroe 06 April 2011

This is simply beautiful. I love the way you almost allude with each stanza. Wonderfully written.

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Louis Rams 06 November 2009

you are in rare form.

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Shoshana Green 04 November 2009

They all shine for you and You, them. Fire and Ice need your cool heat. 'Shine on you crazy diamond.' Imperfect, perfect faceted being. And just to think, I can borrow your deepest eyes for a while, until that is, we blink. Thank you for you light and love.

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Tristan Maverick

Tristan Maverick

Dover, NH
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