Saturday, October 17, 2020

The Owl Omen Comments

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Heed the owl's omen!
Peril peers all men.
As norms run afoul
now release the owl.
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Greg Gaul
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Denis Mair 17 October 2020

You write in short lines like approaching wing-strokes. I like your visceral rendering of the experience- - the rushing of air, the shivery sound. It's a good way to highlight the fool's carelessness. The fool is especially vulnerable when he thinks he is clever.

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