You write in short lines like approaching wing-strokes. I like your visceral rendering of the experience- - the rushing of air, the shivery sound. It's a good way to highlight the fool's carelessness. The fool is especially vulnerable when he thinks he is clever.
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You write in short lines like approaching wing-strokes. I like your visceral rendering of the experience- - the rushing of air, the shivery sound. It's a good way to highlight the fool's carelessness. The fool is especially vulnerable when he thinks he is clever.