Wednesday, September 5, 2012

***the Owl*** Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind whispered natures breath calm, soothing

The still trees silently grasping mother earth
Caressing the breeze with their soft beckoning leaves
Old moon looks on beaming his face with the usual mirth
Nightfall fills with darkness that sleeping never sees
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Valsa George 28 May 2014

Gods wisdom bestowed for nature to survive Talons for a forest shopping basket To live life's purpose and truly stay alive....... Love these lines! Yes, God has equipped every creature with enough features to survive in this Earth! The owl which is a noctural bird and a carnivores is given keen eye sight to penetrate through the gloom of the night and also talons sharp to catch its prey!

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 August 2013

Very lovely poem...Beautiful description of owl...Loved reading it.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 16 August 2013

Love this poem: the wisdom of nature and of the Owl, living life's purpose and truly staying alive

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Patricia Grantham 15 August 2013

Wow this poem is ever so beautiful Ken. A good piece on the haunts and nature of the owl. Its wise appearance with the moon shaped eyes that sees through the dark night watching and waiting for its prey. Its moves are sure and swift as it swoops down for the kill. A very creative write.

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Walterrean Salley 05 October 2012

And truly, a well-written piece on the owl. Love the imagery and indepthness. A really smooth flow. Enjoy it.

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Valerie Dohren 10 September 2012

Great write, good description - you may like to read mine entitled Night Birds.

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Heather Wilson 08 September 2012

Talons for a forest shopping basket, (no supermarkets for them) a wonderful write, so descriptive.

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Ken e Hall

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