Wednesday, July 10, 2019

The Overpopulated Studio Comments

Rating: 5.0

The bed room is nice with all the facilities
It's furnished with all the needed utilities,
An artist is sleeping in it, smiling and dreaming,
He has just finished a wonderful painting,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 July 2019

A wonderful poem. An imaginative write that tackles the intricacies of life. Yes.overpopulation always presents problems. Beautifully written.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 July 2019

they say let the dragon sleep why irk it twill ye sweep a cliche maybe JA JI

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 July 2019

Reading this poem, I thought of a variety of poems that you have written, with a variety of colours of emotions. But I don't know if the studio, the Louvre of poems can be called overpopulated. A nice piece.

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Jane Campion 10 July 2019

An imaginative poem read through my third eye.

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