The Overpopulated Studio Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Overpopulated Studio

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The bed room is nice with all the facilities
It's furnished with all the needed utilities,
An artist is sleeping in it, smiling and dreaming,
He has just finished a wonderful painting,
In a studio adjacent to the bed room,
The painting broke in two, a bride and a groom,
A painting of thinking and reproducing life,
Somehow it broke in two, a husband and a wife,
The couple has developed communication in literature,
Thinking was evolved in love, sex, and reproduction,
Life remained nice for sometimes in poetry and fiction,
Fantasies were developed in powerful armatures,
The fan went on rotating for the colourful creatures,
The vast studio is now full with uncountable colours,
Flowers are still painted and still have sexy odours,
But the studio has become too small for the works of art,
How sad the brush is painting now bushes of thwart!
I am afraid of a mutiny of increasing paintings,
The artist is still sleeping and dreaming,
What of if they break in through the doors of the bed room,
If the artist awakes he may destroy the bride and the groom!

Wednesday, July 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
According to Hindu mythology Shiva has three eyes and when he opens his third eye, everything is destroyed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 July 2019

A wonderful poem. An imaginative write that tackles the intricacies of life. Yes.overpopulation always presents problems. Beautifully written.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 July 2019

they say let the dragon sleep why irk it twill ye sweep a cliche maybe JA JI

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 July 2019

Reading this poem, I thought of a variety of poems that you have written, with a variety of colours of emotions. But I don't know if the studio, the Louvre of poems can be called overpopulated. A nice piece.

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Jane Campion 10 July 2019

An imaginative poem read through my third eye.

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