Thursday, July 26, 2007

The Outcry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mountains stand straight against the barren sky
And it looks like a pastel drawing.
Where is that bird's song going?
Butterflies could see only in the season
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nimal dunuhinga
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Joseph Daly 28 July 2007

Nimal, once again a masterful compositition. Allison is right; you are one of PH's greatest poets. The lines here are without dout those of pastel. Only you could portray rage in such a becalmed manner.

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Alison Cassidy 27 July 2007

Your rage is penned with such beauty Nimal that the reader becomes lost in pastel images and transformed. Another fine poem from one of the site's finest poets. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 26 July 2007

This beautiful poem is certainly not a mistake. It was penned by a fine imagist. Wonderful work, Nimal. Encore! Warmest regards, Sandra

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