Thursday, June 8, 2006

The Outcome Comments

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Somewhere now –
They’re hiding in ambush.
Forget the sun—
They’re waiting for you.
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Jonzo Bandwagoner
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Sophia White 08 June 2006

A very pssionate poem, Jonzo. Good job conveying the emotion.

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Leigh A. Hill 08 June 2006

wow this is a powerful poem that relays equally powerful feelings. good job! love starr

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Jonzo Bandwagoner

Jonzo Bandwagoner

Huntington, NY
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