Thursday, October 9, 2014

The Outcast Comments

Rating: 5.0

The outcast
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Upon the cool and firm sand
Lay a body forsaken and naked
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 12 October 2014

Above I saw clouds Chasing each other And the brilliant hue Turning to purple to gold And twilight giving way to night..........................beautiful lines....i like it

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Valsa George 10 October 2014

It is so heart rending a sight! Human cadavers beaten back to the shore bloated and wreaking in stench and lying there for sometime like castaways and again reclaimed by the sea! A great write! I give you a 10..... (unlike you, I never forget to award the marks once rated.... ha... ha..!)

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