The Other Woman Comments

this poem is beautiful, i love the way you put it together. it is short and sweet but in few words that you say you say alot. it so beautiful. wonderful; job. keep it up. i give this a 10.

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

Beautiful Poem, I know times in my life when this poem is so fitting not of my self but of a another. Locking horns with another lover. A brutal fight to reveal the light. Hated because now her eyes are open. I don't care who is chosen.