Wednesday, October 10, 2018

The Other Woman Comments

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I just have one question—
One thing I want to know
Was she beautiful when you cheated?
—Tell me;
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Axley Jade Blaze
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2018

Odds of life! ! Pains of life! Heartbreak! ! ! ! Trying to overcome. Sadness! ! Now it is evil which reigns! Thanks for sharing. The very step ahead. Able to change.

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Sandra Feldman 10 October 2018

Oh, this Poem, How it flows! Rivers of thoughts and words Put together with such talent, That it fascinates and glows! And the surprise ending adds even more to the totality of this exceptional work. Congratulation. Once I started reading, couldn't stop, I was mesmerized, still am.......

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Nicole D. 26 May 2019

I appreciate your feedback! This poem was written quite some time ago when I was watching a loved one struggle with something fierce, which caused irreversible damages. It's a narrative, which I am penning a full memoir about as well. Thx again! Xx NDS

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