The Other Transparency Comments

I like the atmosphere and picture you have created!

A shrinking rivulet flows as a thin staff of an old man Stones lay bare in the transparent brook. really loved these lines..........! !

I like the brevity of the poem, remarkable

I like the amazing picture created here...it always simple but always amazing. There is another transparency i see..here in your poetry...cool write Subodh! _Unwritten Soul

i found it alluring....perfect..... thanks for inviting me

simple poem I really like it well done :)