Wednesday, April 27, 2011

' The Other Thing Immortality ' Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Came lazy and stretched summer afternoon
Nothing to do, you chase a butterfly
Its wings swiftly flutters
Balancing the load of sunrays
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subodh pandey
Wings butterfly Immortality
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Chinedu Dike 16 January 2015

A nice piece of poetry penned in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Roong S 15 July 2012

A very good one! Keep writing..

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Supriya Prathapan 11 June 2012

Alas! Every one has to die one day but memories remain.

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Aman Sa 18 March 2012

This is wonderful creation, , well done

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Silverinna Annastasia 06 February 2012

Quite interesting. I give you my appreciation. Well done.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 14 January 2012

I do not wish to live for ever. We are not able to change with the time. The poem is very good.

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