Monday, July 4, 2011

The Other Storyteller Comments

Rating: 3.5

Do you hear his retiring, from day long work
his foot lazily falls on the ground
not to annoy earth or from tiredness.
The lossened clay and we call him,
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subodh pandey
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Allemagne Roßmann 21 August 2011

through the fire he changes everytime his transformation escapes us stars stay for a while as a mute witness. the ceteris paribus and non-sequiturr of the poem here lies underneath. Very vivid description and rigid imageries galore here.Scintillating poetry.

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