The Other Side Of Dawn Comments
I always think of her no matter time of day
No matter the influences that come my way,
Though parted by distance and trials of day
She is with me no matter come what may.
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Thank you for your kind words, Melissa! I am glad you found a measure of enjoyment from the writing. Best wishes in all your endeavors!
Very intriguing poem. The last two lines My unbound feelings for her will one day reveal A love—for now—I'm honor-bound to conceal. seem to imply that you are in love with someone else's wife and cannot do anything about it at this time. Well written.
Thank you, Kim for your review of the work and your kind rating. Yes, the phrase honor-bound to conceal'' I felt would add an element of mystery at the end that readers would appreciate. Perhaps it is someoneelse's wife, or maybe it's the writer who is married. Maybe both are married and thus, the mystery remains unsolved. Best wishes, Kim!
Stupid PC...the last reply should read...someone else's wife.... Please excuse the oversight.
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7/20/2025 9:27:03 PM # 1.0.0
beautiful poem so inspiring.. i can relate so much
Thank you, Cherry, for your beautiful comment. I am happy you found it enjoyable. You must tell me some time how you arrived at Wild Grass Cad for a pen name. I would be most interested to learn about its origin. Take care in all you do, Cherry...and again, Thanks!